tarlyte
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Post by tarlyte on Nov 7, 2007 11:38:45 GMT -5
When i talk hear me
When im mad fear me
When im scared hold me
When im bad scold me
When i fall catch me
When im hurt patch me
When im lost lead me
When im hungry feed me
When i cry dont tease me
When i love you never leave me
Because some day you might need me
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Post by steve on Nov 8, 2007 13:38:04 GMT -5
I like this one tarlyte. You have an unsual out look on life. I feel that your words come from deep inside of you. I would like you to do a poem for me if thats possible and you dont mind. Some thing for happyness,
Say you wish to express a mothers happyness for her new born child.
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tarlyte
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Post by tarlyte on Nov 9, 2007 11:38:08 GMT -5
i have written one i will post it soon ok
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Post by steve on Nov 9, 2007 18:45:37 GMT -5
I look forward to seeing it Tarlyte. If you need help with any thing please do ask. We have some great writer's on this site. check out In "writings" in "pagon poetry and writings".
Tiggy is one of my favourite's
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Post by *Gypsy* on Nov 9, 2007 20:33:41 GMT -5
Wow Tar,
that's a very powerful poem,thank you for sharing it with us.
BB Gypsy
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Post by ladyjay on Jan 1, 2008 5:07:03 GMT -5
Thank you. this is very nice.
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