suicide and hate (poem)(violent)

[tarlyte]

Stop breating today
and dont be here tomorrow
swear not to live another day
die in your pools of sorrow
put your face in it and drownd
breath in the salty water
or i will beat you down
because i hate you
and i want you to cry
i know what i want you to do
just kill yourself and die
lie there in your plools of red
breathe in your last breath
its over now your dead
none cared about your death
none went to your funeral when you died
they threw you in the lake
and let your blood soak in the tide
you will never be loved
and your a loser because no one cried

[steve]

Dearest Tarlyte.

Your words interest me. Some years ago i went through a patch in my life that brought forth feelings inside me. These Feelings that i had at the time i put in to words. It was the only time in my life that i did write poetry and it came very naturally. The words and things that i was writing about where very up setting to me and it was a need to get the feeling out of me.

Im interested In where your words come from or are these your feelings.

[tarlyte]

iunno i was just mad decided to write a hateful poem

[ladyjay]

I wouldnt call this hateful. I felt once everything that you said here. It was dark but very beautiful. Thank you.